Dawn service ducks

Hola everyone, Today I have just finished a poem on Anzac day (yes I know I am late...)
but I got inspiration from ducks at the beach that I saw...
here it is:

On Anzac day we remember,

We remember the people who died,

We remember not to make that mistake again

So we stand in the dawn service with pride

But this year is different…

We are stuck on our drive

Yet I am still reminded …

On the beach

Near seaweed trenches

There were ducks in a formal queue 

Watching parades and fighter- jets too!

Performed by birds of all shapes and sizes

While others sing and squawk at food-finding divers

Going home after a long day, 

no need to fight at war hooray!

Ancient Egypt Story board

Hola, my name is Arlo. I have just finished a story board about a day in the life of an Egyptian.
One thing the farmers did was farm grains to make beer and that is what the storyboard is about...
Link that is the link what did you think of it?
what could I do to improve it?
adios amigos,- Arlo

Egypt Genial.ly

Hello again it is the second day after the school holidays and I am growing bored so I started the Ancient Egypt tasks... first on the list is a Genial.ly
This took me two hours one in each day. Here is the link
link it should be fixed...
I hope you enjoy and please tell me if there are any grammar mistakes...
Also I am thinking about that pick a path.
Adios amigos,- Arlo